Initial design ideas:
Now I have a decent body of work I decided to make some initial
design ideas. By doing this I can see how my work looks when it’s presented as
a group and as a design idea, which can help me to determine the path I should
take to improve my work, and what sorts of shooting I should do next.
This
is a variation of the first idea; I was undecided in which picture to use so I made
both so I could compare them more easily. I was undecided because I really
liked the picture of the kids with the carpet but the picture of the backstreet
was more relevant. After looking at both
of them I have decided that the picture of the backstreet is almost as good as
the kids’ picture individually, so I might as well go for the backstreet one because
of the better design relevance.
This
collection works well together because they share the exact same range of tones
and they were shot in the same location (Newcastle) apart from the one on the right
which was taken in Grange-town I think this benefits the composition because it
obviously makes them relevant to each other but it also tells the story of day
to day life the people who live and work in Newcastle and Grange-town To improve
this design I need another picture of day to day life in Newcastle. To increase
my chances of getting a good picture I will go when its market day so there are
plenty of people.
This is a variation
of my first Newcastle design idea. This time I changed the layout of the design
and changed a picture. I decided to add this picture because I think the tones in
it are similar to the others and the content is also similar despite it being from
Darlington. Even though it’s from a
different area it still works well, so the next time I go up to Newcastle I will
take a similar picture to replace it.
I themed
this design around kids because my best images included them; but the same
problem keeps coming up, I don’t have enough images to complete an idea. To complete
the idea I won’t have to do anything
specific because there will be kids at every location I want to go to for other
shoots. Apart from a new picture I should switch the top right picture with the
middle the tones balance more.
After reviewing this design I won’t use it
because the layout is poor, it’s too long so you have to look at each picture individually
so they aren't seen as a group which I don’t want to happen. But this could be a
good layout for a different design that uses my best pictures that aren't relevant
to each other.
Evaluation of initial designs:
I think I have a good base to work from. I have
3 different designs that have potential and can be improved simply. I would
still like to get a few more fresh design ideas. To do this I need to do some
more shooting at some new locations and do some fresh research for fresh
inspiration.
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